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AxelBoat Full Member
Number of posts : 134 Age : 35 Location : LOLS IM IN AFRICA DANCING WITH TRIBES Reputation : 0 Points : 2 Registration date : 2008-07-01
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: COCK IN YOUR MOUTH
| Subject: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 6:16 pm | |
| Leaders and Info Name of owner and members: Jonathan Tyson, Jennifer Aristy Steam IDs of all members: Ray - STEAM_0:1:261545 Jennifer - STEAM_0:1:11841891 Orgaization Info and Character info Organization wanted: The Bloodline Rebellion Bloodline Leader - 55 Gives out commands to everyone. Plans the attacks on the human colony(With permission of HoltK, or Don.) Bloodline Co-leader - 50 One of these. They make sure all the group leaders are doing their job. Makes sure the everyone isn't giving trouble to the Natives, and makes sure everyone is following orders. Bloodline Group Leader - 45 Leads a group of rebels. Limit to four per group including the leader. There will only be four of these. Bloodline Rebel - 40 Basically they do the work thats assigned to them. Escort a native, stuff like that. Organization Type: A rebel organization agianst the Earth Military and the human colony. What is it that your organization will do? OOCly we will add more RP for the Military, Enewa, Police and most likely everyone could be involved in our RP. ICly main goal, is trying to get the Humans back to Earth, and give the Enewa there land back. We're Humans that seen the terrible things the Military has done, by taking over the Enewa's land and want to give it back to them. Organization Bio(optional): The Bloodline Rebellion was started by Jonathan Tyson and Jennifer Aristy. It was started by Tyson and Aristy seeing the terrible things the Military has done to the Natives of the planet. Member bios(optional): Jonathan - Jonathan Tyson was a former military Captain.He was born in The U.S. and then moved to russia. He got involved with the Russian military and was shipped to a diffrent planet. They landed in the planet, their goal was to take the Natives land.While the military was taking part of the Native's land to build a human colony he was patrolling the field of grassland and trees making sure all the Enewa was leaving the area. As he was walking he heard gun fire and screams in one of the Enewa's home. He dashed from the door, his gun ready to fire. As he opened a family of Enewa laid dead. Shot every where, one was even decapitated. The smell of blood and rotted the area. Looking up he saw a Military Startshina. "Like my work?" said the Starshina. Jonathan shook his head in shock, and raised his gun a shot down the starshina. Grabbing all of the equipment he could find from the dead bodies, and the house, he dashed out trying to be unseen by the military. He layed low for a couple of days till the Human colony was built. He later on ran into a lady name Jennifer Aristy, who was a Military Major. She had the same point of view as him on the Military and their plan to take over the land. This was the start of the Bloodline Rebellion. Jennnifer - Born in the U.S. to a retired Military family, her father wanted her to follow in his footsteps as a Military officer. Every day he would show her how firearms worked, and how combat was. Her family moved to Russia when she was 15, for reasons only her father knew. When she became old enough, she went and joined the military, quickly advancing through the ranks due to her knowledge of warfare. She was told that she was going to get a major promotion and was shipped off to another planet, meeting with the commander there. She was told all about the Natives and the Mining operation, and sent out into the field, to clear another E'newa village out. Upon getting there, they encountered a family of Natives who wouldn't leave. Her commanding officer told her that she was to kill them all. Disgusted, she shot them all, leaving dead E'newa scattered about. The next day, she deserted, telling only her closest friends and fleeing from the military outpost. Other What will this organization bring to Mobius RP? Like I said up there, alot more RP for the community to get into. Conflict. Do you and all of your members agree to follow the rules and respect your fellow player and Admins? Yes. | |
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Scott God amoungst Men
Number of posts : 238 Age : 36 Location : location, location, bees Reputation : 0 Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-09-01
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 6:18 pm | |
| Being a rebel doesn't pay this much. | |
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Echo Enforcer Admin
Number of posts : 90 Age : 32 Location : North Carolina Reputation : 0 Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-08-08
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: Raver With A Hardstyle Flavor
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 7:23 pm | |
| Lower the pays, and fight the power man. | |
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Don Punch Admin
Number of posts : 1191 Age : 44 Location : Texas, USA Reputation : 28 Points : 420 Registration date : 2008-07-01
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: Cruisin' down the street in my '64
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 7:39 pm | |
| Just curious, why do human rebels want to attck the human colony.
What are they rebelling against? | |
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DevilDelacroix New Member
Number of posts : 5 Reputation : 0 Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-09-01
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 7:44 pm | |
| Perhaps they're Enowa Rebels? I mean, their world WAS taken away from them from what I understand. | |
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Aristy New Member
Number of posts : 2 Reputation : 0 Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-08-30
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 8:44 pm | |
| First, Learn to spell my name AXEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEL, secondly.... I don't remember what i was going to say. Oh well, I'll think of it and post it later
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Jobey Enforcer Admin
Number of posts : 47 Age : 32 Location : Colorado, USA Reputation : 0 Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-07-03
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: this is SPARTAAAAAAA
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 8:55 pm | |
| I'm with Don... why are humans attacking humans? | |
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Echo Enforcer Admin
Number of posts : 90 Age : 32 Location : North Carolina Reputation : 0 Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-08-08
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: Raver With A Hardstyle Flavor
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 9:00 pm | |
| They're rebeling against the Russian Military, I think anyway. | |
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Kill3456 Full Member
Number of posts : 179 Reputation : 0 Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-07-08
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: edit in profile
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 9:11 pm | |
| - Target wrote:
- They're rebeling against the Russian Military, I think anyway.
The Russian Military dosen't officially occupy the territory, its the Colonial Militia guarding it, technically not sided with everyone and just trying to survive. | |
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AxelBoat Full Member
Number of posts : 134 Age : 35 Location : LOLS IM IN AFRICA DANCING WITH TRIBES Reputation : 0 Points : 2 Registration date : 2008-07-01
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: COCK IN YOUR MOUTH
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 9:41 pm | |
| Okay, new pays.
Bloodline Leader : 45
Bloodline Co-Leader : 35
Bloodline Group leader : 30
Bloodline Rebel : 20
If it still needs to be lower, lower it.
And.. It is stated why we are rebelling agianst our own kind. If you read the application. If you need further description or something. We rebel to help out the Natives. That means, fighting the humans for them, escorting them, protecting them, etc. | |
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Don Punch Admin
Number of posts : 1191 Age : 44 Location : Texas, USA Reputation : 28 Points : 420 Registration date : 2008-07-01
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: Cruisin' down the street in my '64
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 9:45 pm | |
| Yea, I read the app, you may just want to point the attacks more clearly than just "the colony", as those are your brothers and sisters. The colony is just a group of people working and living out their lifes. The military is the ones who have done the "conquest".
I would like to see what the other admins have to say about this too. I like Rebal org's, just make sure its has proper motivation to befor attacking. | |
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AxelBoat Full Member
Number of posts : 134 Age : 35 Location : LOLS IM IN AFRICA DANCING WITH TRIBES Reputation : 0 Points : 2 Registration date : 2008-07-01
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: COCK IN YOUR MOUTH
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 9:46 pm | |
| Yeah, we just I guess "hate" the military. Not the colony. | |
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Scott God amoungst Men
Number of posts : 238 Age : 36 Location : location, location, bees Reputation : 0 Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-09-01
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 9:48 pm | |
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HoltK God amoungst Men
Number of posts : 287 Age : 33 Location : Kenosha, Wisconsin, USA Reputation : 0 Points : 4 Registration date : 2008-07-01
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: Lulz No clue!
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 9:50 pm | |
| I like the idea. You just need to add more detail into what you will be defending, attacking, and what/who you stand for. | |
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Scott God amoungst Men
Number of posts : 238 Age : 36 Location : location, location, bees Reputation : 0 Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-09-01
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 9:54 pm | |
| Well, It's Russian and Kill's in charge so it will probably be somewhat oppressive. | |
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Jobey Enforcer Admin
Number of posts : 47 Age : 32 Location : Colorado, USA Reputation : 0 Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-07-03
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: this is SPARTAAAAAAA
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 9:55 pm | |
| Yeah, the only reason I'm hesitating accepting is because I see no cause to attack the military. Like Holtk said, what are you fighting for? | |
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AxelBoat Full Member
Number of posts : 134 Age : 35 Location : LOLS IM IN AFRICA DANCING WITH TRIBES Reputation : 0 Points : 2 Registration date : 2008-07-01
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: COCK IN YOUR MOUTH
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 9:58 pm | |
| We defend the Enewa/Native colony. We attack when needed. If the military attacks us, we attack them. Here's the group system I came up with. There will be four groups. They will switch shifts every day. Group one will be at the Enewa Colony defending, group two will be carrying out missions that are ordered that day, if there are none, they will be Defending with group 2. Group three will be trying to gather info, and I dont know about group four yet. Everyday each group will switch. If the Military attack the native colony, all groups will be helping defending the colony. It's pretty confusing, I know. But I think it will bring great RP if I RP it correctly, which I will.
EDIT: To Jobey, We won't be attacking them. We're just defending the Native Colony. We will only attack if they cause conflict with any of the Enewa. Say, they invade the colony we fight with the Enewa. | |
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Don Punch Admin
Number of posts : 1191 Age : 44 Location : Texas, USA Reputation : 28 Points : 420 Registration date : 2008-07-01
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: Cruisin' down the street in my '64
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 10:18 pm | |
| Sounds like you should just be E'Newa, lol. | |
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AxelBoat Full Member
Number of posts : 134 Age : 35 Location : LOLS IM IN AFRICA DANCING WITH TRIBES Reputation : 0 Points : 2 Registration date : 2008-07-01
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: COCK IN YOUR MOUTH
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 10:44 pm | |
| I explained to you ingame. We'll do more than just protect it. And I don't wanna look like a smurf >.> | |
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Kill3456 Full Member
Number of posts : 179 Reputation : 0 Points : 0 Registration date : 2008-07-08
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: edit in profile
| Subject: Re: Org App Mon Sep 01, 2008 11:23 pm | |
| If this is a human group, then it seems alot more like a mercenary faction than a Partisan Group, why help out a race that despises humanity for the most part anyways? You have to be mercenaries to work alongside them. | |
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chilled Enforcer Admin
Number of posts : 96 Location : Melbourne / Australia Reputation : 0 Points : 1 Registration date : 2008-07-06
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: a vcr floating in mid air?
| Subject: Re: Org App Tue Sep 02, 2008 12:57 am | |
| - Don Punch wrote:
- Sounds like you should just be E'Newa, lol.
I have to agree on this one. | |
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Don Punch Admin
Number of posts : 1191 Age : 44 Location : Texas, USA Reputation : 28 Points : 420 Registration date : 2008-07-01
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: Cruisin' down the street in my '64
| Subject: Re: Org App Tue Sep 02, 2008 1:22 am | |
| I would suggest clearly outlining what your groups motives are, what their goal is, and some senario examples of how your org will interact with the server.
All this info in the app will be OOC of course, and I dont mean for you to give out any secrets. I, and I think some fellow admins are just wanting to see that this will be a well thought out rebellion befor it even starts. I know you are a good Rper, so that is not in question, I just don't really see the need for rebellion just yet. This is the type of org that should start up after a few days, or a week into character development.
I am all for rebals and shiz, I made the map layout designed around massive battles and invasions takeing place, I mean, there is a military base in the city. | |
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Mr. Elmos Enforcer Admin
Number of posts : 362 Age : 30 Location : California, USA Reputation : 4 Points : 48 Registration date : 2008-07-31
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: : "I believe it is an old Wooden ship used in World War 1..."
| Subject: Re: Org App Tue Sep 02, 2008 1:56 am | |
| - Don Punch wrote:
I am all for rebals and shiz, I made the map layout designed around massive battles and invasions takeing place, I mean, there is a military base in the city. Well Don is right | |
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AxelBoat Full Member
Number of posts : 134 Age : 35 Location : LOLS IM IN AFRICA DANCING WITH TRIBES Reputation : 0 Points : 2 Registration date : 2008-07-01
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: COCK IN YOUR MOUTH
| Subject: Re: Org App Tue Sep 02, 2008 5:51 pm | |
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Mr. Elmos Enforcer Admin
Number of posts : 362 Age : 30 Location : California, USA Reputation : 4 Points : 48 Registration date : 2008-07-31
Character sheet Hmm whats this now: : "I believe it is an old Wooden ship used in World War 1..."
| Subject: Re: Org App Tue Sep 02, 2008 6:14 pm | |
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