liquids new ranks AGAIN (don helped my format a little)

Rp Name: Liquid 'Gambit' Ocelot (to make a long story short, vizzini saw x-men and wanted me to be gambit, im not an x-men nerd lol)

steam id: STEAM_0:0:6870673

Organization Name: Brotherhood of Blood

IMPORTANT SIDE NOTE READ: (this is dedicated to us vampires, siphyon si, the medical director was unable to make this org and he asked me to make it and lead it. I dedicate this to siphyon)

Brotherhood of Blood Dark Blade 50$: The man who created this organization in dedication to the patriarch.

Brotherhood of Blood Necris 45$: One of the elite vampires.

Brotherhood of Blood Brood Spawn 40$: A vampire with potential higher then the normal vampires

Brotherhood of Blood Runt 35$: A simple vampire

Brotherhood of Blood Fledgling 30$: a weak and expendable ghoul.

BIO: the brotherhood of blood title was invented by a man names Siphyon Si. He later expanded his number of ghouls to eventually reach Liquid Ocelot. Liquid understood Siphyon Si could not leave his medical career, and dedicated a group of people to Siphyon Si. Although Liquid controls the brotherhood, Siphyon controls liquid.

Why we should give you this org: we dont exactly think it's fair that someone can be a vampire and a cop. We believe vampires should now become with the brotherhood, hiding in dark places and dealing with witnesses later on. I think this would help the rp, even for the sudden thirst we have (no joke, there is a percentage) to feast on someone (does not kill them).

we dont need hideouts or anything, we got that covered.

VOTE:
Deny

Reason(s):
- Third org remake in the past month
- Org with jobs/salaries for a group of vampires? I'd rather not get into this again
- Get a proper org that looks legit and rp your characters as vampires in the shadows.
- You don't need job titles and a salary to further remove realism with this whole vampire thing

I agree with toXicity for the most part, except he's still whining about realism.

I also vote to deny.

Spunky wrote:

I agree with toXicity for the most part, except he's still whining about realism.

I also vote to deny.

Probably cause we're not playing oblivion or WoW ^^

I agree, Denied.
and based on the past few org concepts I think you should reconsider leading an org and instead focus on learning more about RP and writing, they both come with experience (though you need quality). This time I don't actually mean any offense (as apposed to the other times where i was looking to be a dick) but not everyone has to lead an organization, try embracing your inner newb for a while and learn something.